Thursday, December 17, 2015

Written Expression : "Pig" Roald Dahl.

Lexington grew up as an orphan, the boy had a difficult and painful childhood. The orphanage which welcomed him was one of the worst, located in a poor slum of Brooklyn, away from the Upper East Side where he was supposed to live a happy and comfortable life, but fate had decided otherwise.
However, his early teen years were kind of instable.
He turned into a thug, a thief and he swore to get vengeance when he discovered the truth about his parent's death. On the other hand, the policemen kept doing their job, the judges had been corrupted and they were declared innocent and the case had been closed since then.
Lexington reached adulthood but couldn't attend any college or university since his criminal record proved he was a potential danger.
He finally decided to get his revenge. He set up some smart traps in which the gun would open fire on the police at the moment they opened the door.
The gun would automatically trigger since it was linked to a wire. He was sitting in his armchair, an evil smile on his face when the bell rang.
"That must be the pizza deliverer!" He said.
Lexington was so hungry that he totally forgot about the trap, he ran to the door and opened it, but before he could say a word, the sound of a gunfire rang out tnad the man fell down on the ground.
Too bad.. Lol.

3 comments:


  1. Your story is very original I love your sense of humor

    Especially at the end

    But I find
    You take not much the author's style Despite that
    i very like your end

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  2. Your history of falling was... unexpected. I choose your text because it's a nice tragic end, Lexington can't revenge his parents and die as if he never do something in his life. "That must be a pizza" and ..."Lol" appease this terrible end... Lol.

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  3. I chose your story because I think it is the most original! You can turn an extract of drama into a comedy, and without difficulties! A good English and great structures, no problem!

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